McDonalds War - Robot Narrative

My Reflection

I am learning to write a narrative using DASH?.  I am most proud of my speech because more speech makes it more realistic and more like a real story.  My next step is to describe the character more in my story.

DASH? Magical Creatures

My Reflection

I am learning to write a narrative story using DASH? I am most proud of my action in my story because it made it more interesting.  My next step is to make my

Six Sentence Story

My Reflection

I am learning to write a six sentence narrative.  I am most proud of where the character lived.  My next learning step is to write another six sentence narrative about a different character.

Stream Clean up

 
                                                                     My Reflection 

  I am Learning To use a variety of sentences to make my writing more interesting.  I can now use a w at the start of a sentence using the 5 W's.  Next I can try to use short sentences.

Persuasive Speech

My Reflection

I am learning to write a persuasive writing.  I am most proud of Speech because I added a lot of facts and I made it better.  My next step is to write a better hook.

Explanation Writing Compost

My Reflection

I am learning to write an explanation.It was tricky to write in the correct order. I can improve by using more technical words next time.

Explanation Writing

My Recount

My Reflectoin

I am learning to write a recount.  I am most proud of trying to put my story in order.  My next learning step is to work on a hook. 

Narrative writing-Fractured Fairytail

                                                                     My Reflection
I have been learning to write  a fractured fairy tale using what i  have learned about narrative Structures  and features.  My fractured fairy tale was based on the three little pigs.  i am most proud of  my pixle art because every one did a big one but i didn't rely.

Character Description

                                                              My Reflection
W.A.L.T write a character description.  Using adjectives I fond this picture tricky to describe because I didn't  have that much words but I got it done.  I used my 5 senses to write 5 different sentences about my character.  My next step is to use a simile or metaphor.

Comparing Fairy Tales

                                                                   My Reflection
I have been learning to identify common themes in fairy and fractured tales.  We read two narrative called Red riding and Into the Forest. " A common theme I made from these stories was they both had a red riding hood and a basket of food for grandma.  I found this hard because i didn't know this at first
my next step is to write my own fractured fairy tale.

Persuasive Speech Research popplet

                                              My Reflection
I have been learning to find information about my speech topic.
I used Instgrok and other websites to research my speech topic which is no littering
I found this interesting because we got to go on a website Instagrok it was cool
My next step is to plan my speech.

Features of Persuasive Writing

My Reflection
We have been learning to find the features of persuasive writing.
I found this little tricky but I had some help from the Teacher.  I need to keep learning about the features of persuasive writing.  My next step is to write a persuasive speech

Ordering an expplanation

My Reflection

We have been learning about the structure and order of writing on explanation.  We had to put the piece of writing an explanation.  We had to put the piece of writing in the correct order.  I found this tricky because i just found it tricky putting them in order.  My next step is to write my own explanation writing.

100 Word Challenge

My Reflection 

I have been learning to add detail to my writing.  We had to imagine we were a soldier or a family member and write about this picture I used punctuation to make my writing more interesting. My next step is to add more adjectives  to make my writing interesting.

A Moment In time writing

My Reflection
I have been learning to use strategies to add detail to my writing. I wrote about a moment in time
 during my Awsome Holiday.  I used my 5 senses to add detail to my writing.  The best part of this was when
I got to chose the pictures and the writing because it was fun.  I found this work easy because we just
did some writing and got a picture and boom.  My next step is to use more verbs and adjectives and wow words.

Adding More Detail to My Writing - The Present Recount

My Antonym Diamante poem

My Reflection
I am Learning to write an antonym diamante poem. An antonym is its the opposite
of some thing like fire and ice its opposite.A diamante poem is whats a shape of a dimond  
 I found this hard because I could´int  find much words but i got some.My next step is to use intristing words
not boring words.

My Metaphor Poem

My Reflection    

I have been learning to use metaphors to make it more interesting by making pictures in the readers head.  I was surprised that we could put pitchers on to it`. My next step is to know how to do it so I don't need help.                                                                

My biopoem

My Reflection

We have been learning to write a bio poem.   A bio poem is a poem written about ourselves.
It has a special structure that we had to use to write our poems.  I found this easy because it was
just easy.  My next steps is to use interesting words.