Thursday, 18 May 2017

A Moment In time writing

My Reflection
I have been learning to use strategies to add detail to my writing. I wrote about a moment in time
 during my Awsome Holiday.  I used my 5 senses to add detail to my writing.  The best part of this was when
I got to chose the pictures and the writing because it was fun.  I found this work easy because we just
did some writing and got a picture and boom.  My next step is to use more verbs and adjectives and wow words.

1 comment:

mum said...

You love swimming in summer, even when its a little cold. Nice choice of words PJ.