Friday, 16 June 2017

100 Word Challenge

My Reflection 
I have been learning to add detail to my writing.  We had to imagine we were a soldier or a family member and write about this picture I used punctuation to make my writing more interesting. My next step is to add more adjectives  to make my writing interesting.

1 comment:

mum said...

I can see you really thought about what going to war might be like for the mum and dad. We are very lucky we don't have to go to war and say good bye to each other!