tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4876855854045741690.post264851390373709595..comments2019-02-01T10:26:47.507+13:00Comments on PJ @ Elm Park School : My make believe landClassof2019http://www.blogger.com/profile/02313464699381718303noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4876855854045741690.post-28129589655331667952016-03-19T10:49:55.537+13:002016-03-19T10:49:55.537+13:00I like how you carefully planned and then drafted ...I like how you carefully planned and then drafted your writing. Let's work on editing our own work and remembering where to put capital letters and full stops.Miss Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01681746258578988375noreply@blogger.com